Monday, May 11, 2009

Essay #5

The term homosexual is defined as being sexually attracted to someone of one’s own sex. For the purpose of this essay, it can be defined as a romantic love between two people of the same gender. In his essay, “Come Back to the Raft Ag’in, Huck Honey!,” Leslie Fiedler suggests that the relationship between Huck and Jim is expressed as homosexual attraction involving a young White boy and an older African-American man. Although Mr. Fiedler writes that Huck and Jim’s activities translate to a homoerotic relationship, I disagree with him because Huck and Jim’s relationship is more like one between a father and son. They have a certain love for one another but without romantic connections.

In the book, Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, Huck is a character who most of the time depends on someone who is older than him. Huck is only fourteen years old, and he needs someone to support him and provide him love. Huck has gone through many problems in his life. He doesn’t have a mother, who is usually one of the main positive influential persons, and even though Huck has a father, he has never been a good father for him. For this reason, he doesn’t know what is right or wrong. Huck makes a choice from what he feels is right. His father is the worst father that anyone could have. The only thing that Huck learns from his father is not to be a successful person.

Throughout the Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, Huck and Jim’s relationship is growing during their struggle and dangerous voyage. They support each other throughout their journey. Moreover, they both have the same general goal, which is to get away from bad things in their lives. Each experience between these two builds a stronger and deeper relationship. For example, one day, Huck is forced to make a decision whether or not to turn Jim in. At the end, Huck decides against turning Jim in, which Huck thinks is the right thing for him to do; even though, he knows the law. Huck says, “All right, then, I’ll go to hell” (Twain 201). This action shows that Huck will sacrifice for Jim, like a son who tries to protect his father, or a friend who cares for his own companion.

While Huck and Jim are traveling down the river, it appears that Jim is becoming more of a father figure to Huck. For example, one night, they find a house floating down the river and a dead body inside the house. It appears that the dead man is Huck’s father. Jim tries to protect Huck from feeling pain and being depressed like a father would do for his son. Jim knows that if Huck sees his real father’s dead body, Huck will get scared. Jim puts a rag over Huck’s father and tells Huck not to look at the dead man. This is an example of a good parenting, not homosexuality between Huck and Jim as Mr. Fiedler writes.

4 comments:

  1. 1)Your thesis was basically stating how jim and huck's relationship was more of a father son relationship not a homosexual attraction.
    2)You give examples of how their relationship is more of a fathe son relatioship.
    3)Yes, you do a good job explaining why it's that type of relationship. But maybe you should include more qoutes to have a litte more support.
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    5)Inlcude more qoutes for support.
    6)You should talk more about why people beleive that their relationship was a homosexual one.
    7)Your doing a good job with your essay=)
    have a great summer!

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  2. 1.Your thesis is: "Although Mr. Fiedler writes that Huck and Jim’s activities translate to a homoerotic relationship, I disagree with him because Huck and Jim’s relationship is more like one between a father and son." I understand that you are arguing about the relationship between Jim and Huck as a father-son, not as a homosexual one.
    2.You give out some examples such as Huck didn't learn anything from his own father, how they protect each other thoughout their journey, and the reason why Jim didn't tell Huck that his father died.
    3.You did some good reasonings about your evidences and really support your thesis.
    4.I don't see any counter-claims here.
    5.I think maybe you need to quote some from Fielder's essay to prove him wrong. (I guess you chose the topic number 1 for your essay right?)
    6.n/a
    7.this essay starts great, Veeya, just some more quotes from the argument essay, then you are good to go.
    Anyway, it's great to be friend with you Veeya, good luck.

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  3. 1. Your thesis is disagreeing with Fiedler's essay;"because Huck and Jim’s relationship is more like one between a father and son. They have a certain love for one another but without romantic connections."
    2. Cite some of Fiedler's evidence of supporting his claims.
    3. Yes, and examples are provided from the book.
    4. Maybe come out with a counter claim to give your essay more of interesting view.
    5.Talk about Fiedler's evidence in his essay.
    6. Fiedler's view of Huck Finn is similar to the other stories he have included in his essay not considering that Huck is very young to expressed homosexual intentions.
    7. Your essay is going to the right track and put out more of Fiedler's work. Good Luck and see you around next semester:)

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  4. 1.) Your thesis is "Although Mr. Fiedler writes that Huck and Jim’s activities translate to a homoerotic relationship, I disagree with him because Huck and Jim’s relationship is more like one between a father and son. They have a certain love for one another but without romantic connections." Good thesis!!!!!!!!!!
    2.) You give good evidence from the book and how the how they don't have a homosexual relationship.
    3.) Good critical thinking skills.
    4.) This is what I think you need to develope. You need to bring in one of Fielder's quotes and discuss it in your essay.
    5.) Bring in examples from fielder and real life situations.
    6.) Need to refute fielder's ideas
    7.) Good Job Veeya!!!!!!!!!! I like it so far and I know how hard this essay is, I didn't understand half of what Fielder said in his essay. Keep going!!!!!!

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